{"id":840,"date":"2016-04-15T23:30:48","date_gmt":"2016-04-16T03:30:48","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/aboutcomics.blogwyrm.com\/?p=840"},"modified":"2016-04-10T17:02:09","modified_gmt":"2016-04-10T21:02:09","slug":"story-construction-sheriff-of-babylon","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/aboutcomics.blogwyrm.com\/?p=840","title":{"rendered":"Story Construction: Sheriff of Babylon"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>Some months ago, I went into a wide survey of the various ways that comics creators actually make their comics.\u00a0 The interaction between writer and artist was a particular focus and two main ways for putting the scripts together:<\/p>\n<ul>\n<li>Script first \u2013 writer delineates what\u2019s to be on each page: number of panels, dialog, action, points-of-view, etc.<\/li>\n<li>Plot first \u2013 writer gives a general outline of the plot and the artist provides the panels to which the writer adds dialog and captions.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p>This week I would like to cover how the creative team on <em>The Sheriff of Babylon<\/em> does their thing.\u00a0 Ironically, I don\u2019t read the title and the material that I am presenting and analyzing is taken from the back of issue #2 of the Vertigo title <em>The Dark &amp; Bloody<\/em>.\u00a0 I can\u2019t say why this piece got included but I am glad that it did as it is always helpful to see how someone does it.<\/p>\n<p>A bit of dwerping around on the internet has revealed to me that <em>The Sheriff of Babylon<\/em> is a 8 issue limited series from Vertigo written by Tom King with art by Mitch Gerads.\u00a0 Vertigo describes the comic series as:<\/p>\n<div class=\"myQuoteDiv\">Baghdad, 2003. Florida Police officer-turned-military contractor, Chris Henry is tasked with training a new Iraqi police force. When one of his trainees ends up dead, Chris is forced to team up with Nassir, the last remaining cop in Baghdad. Pulling the strings to bring them together is the mysterious Sofia, an American-educated Iraqi who has returned to take control of the city\u2019s criminal underworld. This miniseries is a thrilling wartime crime drama told amid one of the most tumultuous times in modern history.<\/div>\n<p>The behind-the-scenes look covers the creation of page 7 of issue #4 and is written by Mitch Gerads.\u00a0 He breaks the creation down into seven steps.<\/p>\n<p>Step 1:\u00a0 First he gets the script from Tom King, which provides a description of action and dialog, panel-by-panel.<\/p>\n<p><a href=\"http:\/\/aboutcomics.blogwyrm.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2016\/04\/SB_Step1.png\" rel=\"attachment wp-att-833\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" src=\"http:\/\/aboutcomics.blogwyrm.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2016\/04\/SB_Step1.png\" alt=\"SB_Step1\" width=\"857\" height=\"550\" class=\"aligncenter size-full wp-image-833\" srcset=\"https:\/\/aboutcomics.blogwyrm.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2016\/04\/SB_Step1.png 857w, https:\/\/aboutcomics.blogwyrm.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2016\/04\/SB_Step1-300x193.png 300w, https:\/\/aboutcomics.blogwyrm.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2016\/04\/SB_Step1-768x493.png 768w, https:\/\/aboutcomics.blogwyrm.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2016\/04\/SB_Step1-810x520.png 810w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 857px) 100vw, 857px\" \/><\/a><\/p>\n<p>Gerads makes a point of saying that the script arrives about a week before he even starts and that allows him to \u2018live with it for a while\u2019, by which he means that he reads it several times and plays the action out mentally before he starts forming them on paper.<\/p>\n<p>Step 2: Gerads develops the layouts in a quick and loose fashion, which he calls \u2018Mitch Gibberish\u2019.\u00a0 The idea here is to get the overall look and feel into the rest of the creative team\u2019s hands.\u00a0 Unfortunately, he doesn\u2019t get into any back-and-forth that may exist where King or editor Jamie Rich may ask for adjustments.<\/p>\n<p><a href=\"http:\/\/aboutcomics.blogwyrm.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2016\/04\/SB_Step2.png\" rel=\"attachment wp-att-835\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" src=\"http:\/\/aboutcomics.blogwyrm.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2016\/04\/SB_Step2.png\" alt=\"SB_Step2\" width=\"990\" height=\"1020\" class=\"aligncenter size-full wp-image-835\" srcset=\"https:\/\/aboutcomics.blogwyrm.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2016\/04\/SB_Step2.png 990w, https:\/\/aboutcomics.blogwyrm.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2016\/04\/SB_Step2-291x300.png 291w, https:\/\/aboutcomics.blogwyrm.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2016\/04\/SB_Step2-768x791.png 768w, https:\/\/aboutcomics.blogwyrm.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2016\/04\/SB_Step2-810x835.png 810w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 990px) 100vw, 990px\" \/><\/a><\/p>\n<p>Step 3:\u00a0 Gerads tries to bring a sense of realism to the book since the events are based on real-life.\u00a0 He, apparently does this by looking at photography of Iraq, military hardware, etc.\u00a0 He also shoots photo references in which he acts out the parts (or gets help from his family \u2013 here pictured his twelve-year-old cousin Coop).<\/p>\n<p><a href=\"http:\/\/aboutcomics.blogwyrm.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2016\/04\/SB_Step3.png\" rel=\"attachment wp-att-834\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" src=\"http:\/\/aboutcomics.blogwyrm.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2016\/04\/SB_Step3.png\" alt=\"SB_Step3\" width=\"412\" height=\"984\" class=\"aligncenter size-full wp-image-834\" srcset=\"https:\/\/aboutcomics.blogwyrm.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2016\/04\/SB_Step3.png 412w, https:\/\/aboutcomics.blogwyrm.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2016\/04\/SB_Step3-126x300.png 126w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 412px) 100vw, 412px\" \/><\/a><\/p>\n<p>Step 4:\u00a0 He says that he tweaks and arranges all of these photographs into a reference collage in Photoshop as a prelude to drawing.<\/p>\n<p><a href=\"http:\/\/aboutcomics.blogwyrm.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2016\/04\/SB_Step4.png\" rel=\"attachment wp-att-839\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" src=\"http:\/\/aboutcomics.blogwyrm.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2016\/04\/SB_Step4.png\" alt=\"SB_Step4\" width=\"466\" height=\"741\" class=\"aligncenter size-full wp-image-839\" srcset=\"https:\/\/aboutcomics.blogwyrm.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2016\/04\/SB_Step4.png 466w, https:\/\/aboutcomics.blogwyrm.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2016\/04\/SB_Step4-189x300.png 189w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 466px) 100vw, 466px\" \/><\/a><\/p>\n<p>Step 5:\u00a0 According to Gerads, The Sheriff of Babylon is done completely digitally.\u00a0 So he then turns the reference layout into a digital blue-line drawing and then covers the drawing with digital inks, resulting in a black-and-white layout.<\/p>\n<p><a href=\"http:\/\/aboutcomics.blogwyrm.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2016\/04\/SB_Step5.png\" rel=\"attachment wp-att-838\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" src=\"http:\/\/aboutcomics.blogwyrm.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2016\/04\/SB_Step5.png\" alt=\"SB_Step5\" width=\"751\" height=\"1159\" class=\"aligncenter size-full wp-image-838\" srcset=\"https:\/\/aboutcomics.blogwyrm.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2016\/04\/SB_Step5.png 751w, https:\/\/aboutcomics.blogwyrm.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2016\/04\/SB_Step5-194x300.png 194w, https:\/\/aboutcomics.blogwyrm.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2016\/04\/SB_Step5-664x1024.png 664w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 751px) 100vw, 751px\" \/><\/a><\/p>\n<p>Step 6:\u00a0 Once the inks are done, Gerads hands off the pages to the color flatter, Joseph Franzzetta, who blocks in random colors so that Gerads can continue to draw.<\/p>\n<p><a href=\"http:\/\/aboutcomics.blogwyrm.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2016\/04\/SB_Step6.png\" rel=\"attachment wp-att-837\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" src=\"http:\/\/aboutcomics.blogwyrm.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2016\/04\/SB_Step6.png\" alt=\"SB_Step6\" width=\"465\" height=\"745\" class=\"aligncenter size-full wp-image-837\" srcset=\"https:\/\/aboutcomics.blogwyrm.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2016\/04\/SB_Step6.png 465w, https:\/\/aboutcomics.blogwyrm.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2016\/04\/SB_Step6-187x300.png 187w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 465px) 100vw, 465px\" \/><\/a><\/p>\n<p>What I believe is happening in Step 6 is that Franzzetta gets the art carefully colored with a palette that can be easily remapped to whatever Gerads want it to be.\u00a0 For example, the green sky in the image above maps to the sandy colored sky in the final done in Step 7.<\/p>\n<p>Step 7: Gerads does the final colors and formats it before sending it off to the printer.\u00a0 Sadly, he doesn\u2019t provide much in the way of how he formats and if formatting includes the speech balloons.<\/p>\n<p><a href=\"http:\/\/aboutcomics.blogwyrm.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2016\/04\/SB_Step7.png\" rel=\"attachment wp-att-836\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" src=\"http:\/\/aboutcomics.blogwyrm.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2016\/04\/SB_Step7.png\" alt=\"SB_Step7\" width=\"463\" height=\"661\" class=\"aligncenter size-full wp-image-836\" srcset=\"https:\/\/aboutcomics.blogwyrm.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2016\/04\/SB_Step7.png 463w, https:\/\/aboutcomics.blogwyrm.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2016\/04\/SB_Step7-210x300.png 210w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 463px) 100vw, 463px\" \/><\/a><\/p>\n<p>So there you have it, a quick look at how the art is done on <em>The Sheriff of Babylon<\/em> following the script-first technique.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Some months ago, I went into a wide survey of the various ways that comics creators actually make their comics.\u00a0 The interaction between writer and artist was a particular focus&#8230; <a class=\"read-more-button\" href=\"https:\/\/aboutcomics.blogwyrm.com\/?p=840\">Read more 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