{"id":429,"date":"2015-07-31T23:47:39","date_gmt":"2015-08-01T03:47:39","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/aboutcomics.blogwyrm.com\/?p=429"},"modified":"2015-08-06T20:51:57","modified_gmt":"2015-08-07T00:51:57","slug":"story-construction-part-5-more-moore","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/aboutcomics.blogwyrm.com\/?p=429","title":{"rendered":"Story Construction &#8211; Part 5: More Moore"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>This week, I start my review of the approach to creating comics authored by Alan Moore.\u00a0 An earlier column touched upon Moore\u2019s approach as viewed through the lens of Neil Gaiman, who claims to have learned his technique directly from Moore.<\/p>\n<p>For those who don\u2019t know, Alan Moore is credited with a fresh approach to comics in the mid-eighties with his tenure on Swamp Thing, Watchmen, and various other titles.\u00a0 Shortly after his success, Moore authored the book entitled <em>Alan Moore\u2019s Writing for Comics<\/em>.\u00a0 The edition that I reviewed was a reprint of the original work with an added Afterword section that was published by Avatar Press in 2006.<\/p>\n<p><a href=\"http:\/\/aboutcomics.blogwyrm.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2015\/08\/Alan-Moores-Writing-for-Comics.jpg\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" src=\"http:\/\/aboutcomics.blogwyrm.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2015\/08\/Alan-Moores-Writing-for-Comics.jpg\" alt=\"Alan Moores Writing for Comics\" width=\"629\" height=\"985\" class=\"aligncenter size-full wp-image-433\" srcset=\"https:\/\/aboutcomics.blogwyrm.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2015\/08\/Alan-Moores-Writing-for-Comics.jpg 629w, https:\/\/aboutcomics.blogwyrm.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2015\/08\/Alan-Moores-Writing-for-Comics-191x300.jpg 191w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 629px) 100vw, 629px\" \/><\/a><\/p>\n<p>As a writer, Alan Moore\u2019s approach to story construction is obviously text-based.\u00a0 That said, it was remarkable how little he dwells on the imagery of the comic in his text.\u00a0 He chooses to confine the majority of his discussion to the thinking process associated with the creating comics.\u00a0 He explicitly avoids saying how he does it<\/p>\n<div class=\"myQuoteDiv\">\n\u2026I don\u2019t want to produce anything that smacks even remotely of \u201cHow to Write Comics the Alan Moore Way.\u201d Teaching a generation of emergent artists or writers how to copy the generation that came before was a stupid idea when Marvel\u00a0 introduced their \u201cHow to Draw\u2026\u201d book and it would be equally irresponsible of me to instruct up-and-coming writers on how to write sickly extravagant captions like \u201cDawn transformed the sky into an abattoir or whatever.&#8221;<\/p>\n<div class=\"myAttrib\">Alan Moore<\/div>\n<\/div>\n<p>Rather he discusses how to think about the craft of comics writing.\u00a0 The main point here is that a story should be useful in some way \u2013 it should be relevant to the reader.\u00a0 He feels that changing printing techniques, adding new characters or new computer graphics won\u2019t make a difference unless the fundamental assumptions of the artform are challenged.\u00a0 And he identifies comics writing as the greater area of focus because it is the very start of the process; the bones on which the flesh of the story is hung.<\/p>\n<h2>Story Structure<\/h2>\n<p>Moore urges the reader to understand the structure of the work that he is creating; even if the creator is deviating from it, it is important to know that he is.\u00a0 He identifies four types of story structure, most of which he used in his run on the Swamp Thing (note some of the terminology is mine):<\/p>\n<ul>\n<li>Elliptical structure \u2013 the elements of the beginning of the story mirror those at the end<\/li>\n<li>Middle-Outwards \u2013 the story starts in the middle and the background is filled in a way that interleaves the pieces with the current story line<\/li>\n<li>POV \u2013 the same narrative of the story is told by more than one character and only by sifting through the various pieces can the reader determine the facts<\/li>\n<li>Gimmick \u2013 a central piece, like a poem, is used around which the rest of the structure is placed<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p>Once the basic notion of the structure is chosen, Moore then identifies areas of story composition.\u00a0 In this category he includes<\/p>\n<ul>\n<li>Transitions \u2013 movement between one scene and another<\/li>\n<li>Pacing \u2013 the intellectual speed at which that the reader moves through the story<\/li>\n<li>Rhythm \u2013 the balance between active and passive panels*<\/li>\n<li>Smoothness of flow \u2013 overall package of the above*<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p>* Note that these definitions are my own based on my reading of Moore\u2019s intent.<\/p>\n<h3>Transitions<\/h3>\n<p>Moore labels transitions as one of the trickiest and intriguing elements of the whole story process.\u00a0 The aim of the transition is to move the reader\u2019s attention from one element to another without disturbing his immersion in the story.\u00a0 Moore\u2019s idea is that the reader voluntarily subjects himself to a kind of hypnosis when reading the comic and the last thing that the creator wants to do is to disturb this with an awkward change in focus.\u00a0 Several concepts are proffered as \u2018tricks\u2019 to make the transitions better.\u00a0 These include:<\/p>\n<ul>\n<li>the use of overlapping or coincidental dialog,<\/li>\n<li>writing in basic units of a page,<\/li>\n<li>and a repeat of images or concepts (e.g., an idea or a color) between scenes.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p>Moore does emphasize that the transition need not be smooth if what the creator is aiming for is a jarring change of attention.\u00a0 But again, this is one of these \u2018it\u2019s okay to break the rule if you know you are doing it moments\u2019.<\/p>\n<h3>Pacing<\/h3>\n<p>The idea here is to meter out the duration that it will take a reader to complete their passage through an entire page.\u00a0 Moore doesn\u2019t have a lot to say on this front.\u00a0 He does cite a standard of 35 words per panel, a figure that I had never encountered prior to reading this piece.\u00a0 According to him, an average reader spends 7 to 8 seconds on such a panel. \u00a0Moore believes that by dwelling on these sorts of concepts, the creator can exercise some control over the duration that the reader spends on each page.\u00a0 To quote Moore<\/p>\n<div class=\"myQuoteDiv\">\nIf you read a few comics with the pacing in mind you soon get a workable intuition for how long the reader will spend on each picture.\u00a0 While this doesn\u2019t give you anything like the rigid control of the time frame enjoyed by the film industry \u2026 it does grant you some broad measure of control over how long it will take the reader\u2019s eyes to be guided through the whole page.<\/p>\n<div class=\"myAttrib\">Alan Moore<\/div>\n<\/div>\n<p>This assertion seems highly questionable based on earlier comments made about the differences between literary works (e.g. novels, short stories, etc.) and film.\u00a0 Moore makes a\u00a0 particular point about the strengths afforded the written work \u2013 particularly that the individual reader can set his own pace; moving forward and even backward as he see fit.<\/p>\n<p>What I believe that Moore actually means is that the creator can set the minimum time that the reader must spend on each page by tailoring the amount of written versus rendered information.<\/p>\n<h3>Rhythm &amp; Smoothness of Flow<\/h3>\n<p>If Moore says precious little about pacing then he says even less about rhythm and smoothness of flow.\u00a0 Specifically, he never mentions them by name again.\u00a0 Getting beyond that point, one can infer possible meanings for him listing them in the first place.\u00a0 The starting point for guessing what he had in mind comes from his insistence that the story is a kind of hypnosis that the reader voluntarily enters.\u00a0 The immediate interpretation is that rhythm is the balance and metering of active versus passive panels. An active panel is one predominantly communicating movement whereas a passive panel communicates location, or thought, or dialog.\u00a0 As far as I know, this terminology is peculiar to me.<\/p>\n<p>This inference is bolstered by Moore\u2019s discussion about the elegance of the fight sequences of Frank Miller, where the active panels are completely devoid of dialog.\u00a0 The action is allowed to happen as in real life without being cluttered by a lot of words.<\/p>\n<p>The smoothness of flow is then judged as the complete package where active and passive panels are knitted together with the pacing and transitions working seamlessly to keep the reader engaged.<\/p>\n<p>Next week, I finish up my summary of the theoretical study of Alan Moore\u2019s Writing for Comics, where I will cover world building and plot and script.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>This week, I start my review of the approach to creating comics authored by Alan Moore.\u00a0 An earlier column touched upon Moore\u2019s approach as viewed through the lens of Neil&#8230; <a class=\"read-more-button\" href=\"https:\/\/aboutcomics.blogwyrm.com\/?p=429\">Read more &gt;<\/a><\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":2,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"open","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"footnotes":""},"categories":[1],"tags":[],"class_list":["post-429","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","hentry","category-uncategorized"],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/aboutcomics.blogwyrm.com\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts\/429","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/aboutcomics.blogwyrm.com\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/aboutcomics.blogwyrm.com\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/aboutcomics.blogwyrm.com\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/users\/2"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/aboutcomics.blogwyrm.com\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Fcomments&post=429"}],"version-history":[{"count":3,"href":"https:\/\/aboutcomics.blogwyrm.com\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts\/429\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":434,"href":"https:\/\/aboutcomics.blogwyrm.com\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts\/429\/revisions\/434"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/aboutcomics.blogwyrm.com\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Fmedia&parent=429"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/aboutcomics.blogwyrm.com\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Fcategories&post=429"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/aboutcomics.blogwyrm.com\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Ftags&post=429"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}